This sweet tang of Indian summer,
how it turns me over with its
strewn luxury, all that brass
and fire, coral and sapphire.
The air is laden with promise;
sun hitches a ride on my back
as if tagging along for the thrill.
And then a small vortex of wind
calls out, careens, an edge of ice
secreted in its wild timbre.
A taint of sootiness threads
this sheerness, such rose of sunsets.
Clouds gather in fists, then dance.
I know well what lies ahead,
heavy velvet days that merge
with chilled silence of night.
All will be safeguarded,
blankets flung about and the
wood stove will be radiant with heat.
This heady flare will dim, one verve
becoming another as great trees
surrender their raiment and rest.
How far am I now from beds of snow
for angels, peals of laughter to scoop
and fill up hollows with winter?
So far that, when I step off the plane,
the Oregon rain with its fineness
and ferocity, even somber romance,
cannot rival the dangerous splendor
of ice strung from northern eaves,
mystic swords winking, startled by light.
4 thoughts on “Friday’s Passing Fancy/Poem: This, and What Lies Ahead”
Great picture of the fall colours. 🙂
Thanks so much.
Absolutely superb language. I began by highlighting this: ‘brass
and fire, coral and sapphire’ – then gave up because there wouldn’t be many phrases that didn’t warrant it.
Oh, my, such wonderful things to hear. I so appreciate your input (even a good critique is welcome). I think this was one of those that erupted right from the heart.