
The breath of winter is flung upon all
and the walk is scented with promise of frost that
may visit or transmute, warmed, into rain.
I am hoping for rain but planning for frost,
even ice, prepared for what comes.
Or I want to think so. I grew up in a land
of dense, deep snow; even birds and branches
were bitten by its ache, shaken by zero dregrees.
The beauty held me. I thought I was lucky.
Being alive was spectacular,
eyes watering, cheeks crisped, mouth puffing breaths
that floated, friendly clouds, in air that stung.
Today I am not afraid of much at all,
knowing I have lived through things like
water pipes freezing, the fire going out
so burning furniture to keep us warm,
cereal for breakfast, lunch and dinner,
being thought a nuisance or failure
so later harmed and forgotten.
Suffering threaded through my passion for living.
Now I suffer with those who have shared such troubles,
and those who know danger and brilliance of snow,
the wonder of slow warmth after sheen of ice.
It is not easy learning to navigate
the wind’s vagaries.
But today I am lucky, still. I know where
I am going, to the broad river and home.
And this wind may carry a long, low moan
but it releases a ribbon of song in between–
and that is what I listen for, and that is what I hear.
A very beautiful poem. “even birds and branches
were bitten by its ache” is a splendid touch
Derrick, much appreciation for your response…yes, winter cold “bites” everything it touches.
Oh dear Cynthia, forgive me if I take up a bit of space here, – I have read your poem over and over and it was just a realization that you are such a kindred spirt to the words of my most favorite poem ever in this world! Island, by Langston Hughes, You write: But today I am lucky, still. I know where
I am going, to the broad river and home.
And this wind may carry a long, low moan
but it releases a ribbon of song in between as well
by Langston Hughes
Wave of sorrow,
Do not drown me now:
I see the island
Still ahead somehow.
I see the island
And its sands are fair:
Wave of sorrow,
Take me there.
May we all learn and live to flow with our sorrows, our graces, our joys and our pains. Wave of sorrow, do not drown us now. . . .
Susn, Susan. Thank you for this. I did not know that poem, and now I do. And glad of it. Thank you always for reading., for knowing my meanings.Love to you.